Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by philneale1952 07-07-2008 04:01,   Zombie My stories invariably start in the same way with some elaborate scene setting, and it does ask that the reader sticks with it.    Hopefully, as in your case, it all comes right in the end, but if it's 'Flash, Bang, Wallop' you're after, I'm not the one for you (not you personally, you understand).    The trouble with writing like this, is that a lot of care has to be taken in the plotline, and I've come unstuck in the past, as Potter will tell you (cheers mate).    Glad you ended up liking it, but I'm not sure there are many more in this particluar locker.    Carpooling? There's a thought - next time you're in the Derby area let me know. Bring the machete along........    Phil   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story