Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by indianaman130 07-05-2008 23:06,   ... Awsome concept. Great ending. I thought your descriptions to be a bit lengthy, be detailed when you need to, like for the object, otherwise let the imagery flow with the words, short and sweet. In my opinion of course.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story