Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by stix9999 12-07-2007 07:06,   ... Have to agree with previous, the end left me flat. Needed more build, something sinister, some foreboding, before grabbing the girl. Style good, held attention waiting for the end. Maybe could've been her wedding ring, rattling around inside. Or one of his body parts...   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story