Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by philneale1952 07-04-2008 07:14,   Picky Little Me Yes I know I am, but overuse of words (buthcer, man, movie) interrupts the flow of what is otherwise a strong short story.     Again this is just me, but try not to get hung up on one particular subject or your writing could become predictable, but then again it never hurt Ian Fleming did it?    Keep going please.....    Phil   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story