Short Stories
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06-15-2007 10:22,
I'm afraid, I'll have to agree with user: "Sunshine"... Your story seems to be compelling to those that feel they lack the emotions surrounding your story, or whom feel it brings forth heart- warming memories that in the end are really mere illusions. You want to share your story and that's understandable, but anecdotes, without any real writing talent, are unworthy of winning the 'short story contest'. In no way am I trying to discourage you from writing; blogging or diary- writing seem to be more of your style, though. I apologize if you take offense; that is not, by all means, my intention.
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