Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Kaelthos 12-05-2007 09:05,   ... It's a great start, I would say that you could probubly write much more just from this start, all the detail is quite gripping. I would suggest you go forward with this and make it more than a short story   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story