Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by bubbly 07-02-2008 19:31,   long hi! jonathan.     well, this is interesting but too long.    as it is over 4000 words, could u make 2 chapters out of it so that a reader can enjoy the read. thanx. lol. ;-)   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story