Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Kasi 07-01-2008 19:42,   ... This story has more character description than the other one of yours I just read, but this one seems to be a part of a bigger story rather than a whole one in its self. To me this is a great start to developing a longer and more sinister plot. It jumped around a bit, but kept me reading.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story