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12-02-2007 08:40,
Lovely; we're left hanging, don't even know if anyone actually dies or not.
Uh, there are obvious limitations to writing only in dialog, and it shows here. But that's the entire point, I suppose.
It's entertaining and somewhat novel.
Good job. Cheers.
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