Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Something Indecent 06-28-2008 23:06,   ... I liked the set up for this at the beginning. As demented as I am I actually wanted the two kids to have a fun sleep over. I think you could've gone into the trauma a bit more (not the bad thing) as georgie gets broken down from living with these psychos.     But yes I thought you did a good job on this. For how long it is you manage to keep the attention of the reader throughout the story. Here's a thought. What if Georgie grew up to be like Kenny? That'd be a nature vs. nurture arguement for ya! This story made me hungry for chicken.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story