Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by philneale1952 06-27-2008 11:19,   ... I think you dealt with a very dark subject in as detached a way as it could possibly be done, and we had a pair like these two over here in the 1960's - Ian Brady & Myra Hindley.    The use of dialogue in with the prose kept the story moving very fast, and overall I think it was well written.    However........(there's always one isn't there?)......your use of profanities (yeah I know it sounds old fashioned) detracts from the way you dealt with the subject.    You clearly have talent to deal with something like this (I wouldn't know where to begin) and you don't need to write like that.    This is the first of your stories that I've managed to read the whole way through more than once. It was a gripper.    Phil   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story