Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by philneale1952 06-26-2008 14:10,   Hey Potter It was intended to be odd. A lot of my stuff is based on 'What If?'.     Remember "Finders Keepers"? That's a 'What if I went back in time? What if I could change my future life in one single act of passing information? What then?'    This one is a 'What if someone out of the blue calls me "dad"? What then?'    The story was about memories lost (his twin brother) and memories gained (him) which he never knew he had until that moment of discovery.    I didn't feel the need to elaborate on the amnesia, but instead to explore the anguish of the woman and her children as they though the husband/father had returned, only to find that he had not.    I laboured on the confusion, and am glad that's what you felt, because the whole story was filled with it from the point at the news stand, right to the end when the hoe fell to the ground.    I had a relative who came out of some similar trauma at the sound of something familiar, although not as dramatic as in the story.    Pleased it was entertaining.    Phil   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story