Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dr Lucifer 06-24-2008 14:40,   Great Dialogue I liked the way you put character into the dialogue. Keep up the good work. I wouldn't take the negative remarks too serious since I haven't encountered pros here yet. (That would include me too.)   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story