Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 06-22-2008 05:45,   good Very well constructed poem. Not all poems need to rhyme...did i spell that right. Anyway, There are a couple things I will critique about this piece. Firstly, the phrase on the 3rd line makes no sense..(I drank from your water)..say what? Secondly, Although (I) believe you're speaking of a country, I can't be sure...what or who is Erin? But over all, good poem.    My opinion...  Your third line should be...  I have tasted your fruit and bathed in your water...sounds good to me... but its your poem.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story