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11-21-2007 13:42,
for me, dog eared refers to pages marked by folding over the corner - I wouldn't use that term to reference age...
I didn't think that the perception of jesus thing should have been there - it was his perception that enabled him to see jesus...
loved the hell to advertise a bible line, and the "comb over" sentence fastened a picture of the salesman into my skull (sorry comb over guys).
I enjoyed the overall story - reading faster as the story progressed.