Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Zombie Punk 06-13-2008 12:12,   Ha! I laughed at some parts. You did excellent job with the dialogue of "The Man Not Known As Gus". Although at the end I had a hard time believing that he would actually jump out of the window. Oh well, It was still pretty funny I say. The alternate ending sounds funny, too.     Cheerio   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story