Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by garyowen 06-11-2008 00:59,   Parapraxis I think that the story works realy well up to and including the spot where Rob is suddenly replaced by fields. Call me wierd if you like but the sudden unexpected had me at this point and would have left me satisfied. The moment the dizzy bitch did the ussual holywood bit and got out of her car it became predictable.  I thought the pace was for the most part verry good.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story