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06-10-2008 18:55,
Really good job!
The story griped me at the beginning, and still hasn't let go. It was powerful in all ways, and in the end, I felt empathy for Adam.
Also, nice use of the biblical names!
Finally, I too am curious about this object in the sky. Will you shed some light, or maybe keep it a mystery; leave it's grip on us. Hmm? I assume it is an meteor, but who knows?
Excellent.
5/5