Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Zombie Punk 06-10-2008 10:56,   wow havent read tolkien yet but i read the dark tower and it reminds me of that. but, your story also REALLY reminds me of the LOTR movies (for i have seen those). the first chapter i was hooked, now this chapter im craving for more. i agree that you need to fix spelling and grammer. one thing for example is you have too many run on sentences. sorry to be a pest :(    wow, this story sure does speed through time zones doesnt it? well, i seem to like that. i love this story so far, it is something else, man, really.     nice, vivid details and realistic fantasy dialogue.     if i had to put this series into one word it would be magnificant   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story