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06-09-2008 19:10,
i thought this was good. i didn't think it was too fast because it seemed like you wanted to really elaborate on the horrible torture and death she was going to receive. really horrible ending though. and that's what i'll never understand about this life that we are given....why do some of us grow up and then die a death such as that. one where we have no control over. why do some of us get to live fulfilled lives but others die horrible unspeakable deaths. okay well like the stick said now i'm rambling...but i did like this.