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06-09-2008 14:57,
This was extremely interesting! I really needed this! Really! I enjoy stories like this, and how it was planned together. What a difference from your series Haze. Though, I'm not too sure how he died. The road and piece of metal gave me hints, but it's good to leave questions.
Heaven, huh? Wow, he actually killed himself.
The imagery was great, how he broke his arm, then he was free of pain, but then when they were trying to bring him back he felt it again. I felt like I was actually laying there myself. This was awesome! I expect more like this!