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06-09-2008 13:52,
I agree, it did seem a bit rushed. I would have never thought Pukey was infected though. Nice idea to carry him throughout the few chapters and turn him into another danger. I'm thinking the red/white skin or liquid is blood and puss...Is it? Still working on it.