Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by indianaman130 06-08-2008 10:54,   ... Please don't use caps all through, hard to find sentence endings. Be a little more descriptive of non humans and work on the flow of the talking and story in general. To me was a little visually choppy.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story