Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by philneale1952 06-08-2008 04:28,   WOW Hi Jessie    This could be a saga alond the lines of Tolkien or Piers Anthony, but I transferred it to Words to read it better (Now deleted).    The storyline is interesting and I'm not surprised that you wrote it over a period of time.    My only critiscism is your spelling and grammar. Whilst there are profound differences between English (British) and English (American), read through your submission before confirming it on to the site. I read somewhere once that Britain and the USA are two great nations DIVIDED by a common language (!).    I'm not being harsh. If the story was no good I wouldn't even have bothered. I thought you were on to something after the end of chapter one, and haven't changed my mind since then.    Looking forward to the next part to see which direction you are going.    Phil   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story