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06-07-2008 19:15,
I enjoyed the idea of this story a lot. I think you could have expanded it some and turned it into a true horror story, but this works pretty well.
I also like the humor that you injected into the story. It took away from the scary aspect, but I love the whole "Hello, Sidney" spoof. Keep up the good writing!