Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 06-07-2008 18:34,   ... Thank you cookingwine, for echoing thoughts I have had myself about this series. I wrote all of these chapters with the main aim of getting my concepts down and the narration reflects that; I have a new aim one day of rewriting this as a longer tory, with a main character that has an actual persona. I would consider this series to be a condensed version of a full length novel. And yes, you would think they'd be smart enough to kill him without warning, its just important that he doesnt realise it.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story