Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by lemon 06-05-2008 12:45,   ... I liked what you wrote however, I think that the format it's in makes it a difficult read. I think if you broke it up into stanzas like in a poem, it would be better. JMHO :) keep posting   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story