Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 06-04-2008 04:42,   ... I have done the stare at the clock hangover thing too many times, its not fun. I am sometimes overwhelmed by your writing style, and thats not a bad thing, but by which I mean that your descriptions and metaphors are sometimes so abstract that I have to reread them again. It forces me to pay attention and think instead of skim reading which I have a habit of doing. You take great effort to describe minutae, every nuance of thought and events of what amounts to a few moments in time for the character. Which is an interesting style.   That said, I think the drawback is that there is no plot in this tale. This didnt seem to have an ending, it just stopped mid story. I honestly cant think what the ultimate point of this story is, except perhaps an exercise in descriptive writing.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story