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06-04-2008 01:42,
what the hell? that was one weild tale heheh. it was pretty funny but you need to edit it a little. ummm when you use cuss words its really annoying when you use **** instead of the word. it draws from the story, too. just use the word fuck and the word shit, it wont hurt any. but overall this story made me laugh a couple times so good job.