Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by lemon 06-03-2008 07:27,   ... Right now i'm trying to introduce the characters to the reader and the next couple of chapters I will be developing the story line more. Just in case anyone thought this was kind of wonky. :)   Comment and Suggest away!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story