Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 06-02-2008 16:45,   ... This is a good opening, in that it has me wanting to go to the next chapter. There are conflicting messages from the narrator, that she wants to sit next to her brother who is sitting on a bench watching her, despite there being a restraining order. People are complex   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story