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05-30-2008 11:17,
Ok, I see your style of writing having read both your stories. You write of the unbelievable, but hey, thats what fiction is. There were some paragraphs in there that I really liked how you worded, then there were some that didnt have the same impact. Im glad you brought back the husband into the story. I was worried near the end that he wasnt gonna come to the rescue. The last line was a cute way to end this nonsensical story. You have a neat imagination that reminds me of another writer that was once on here. Keep it up.