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05-30-2008 10:40,
hmmm, this was wierd. You gave a vailent effort to make this story scary, something that is extemely hard to do when writing of ghost...simply, well lets face it ,,they don't exist. This story for me had just to many references to beer being thrown about, and also, it was hard to keep track of the four characters and what they were doing,,if a sword weilding ghost was coming at me, id probally just shit myself. Didn't like the way you ended it either,,,by saying this is a true story,,,no person would buy this as really happening. By the way,,,I dont mean to be offensive, but when i look at your profile pic i instantly think of the late John Candy...no disrespect there intended. To sum it up, this wasnt all THAT bad.