Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Hodders 05-30-2008 08:56,   ... Very dark and graphic, I do like the style. To improve it i'd add more of the senses and also use paragraphs and indents as well as more speech but i liked it!   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story