Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 05-29-2008 17:01,   not bad This was kinda good in a weird sort of way. It tells the story of a hard working man having to cater to the rich snob who feels so much more worthy then the lower class. It had some grammar errors, commas out of place and that sort of thing, but most stories can be nit pick. I liked this story alot, it said alot in a short space. My only problem is the use of the term designer pussy. It degraded the story to a..well, lower class..no pun intended. My advice is to take out that term with another phrase or so that indicates the same message your trying to convey....great lil short.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story