Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by lemon 05-29-2008 12:49,   ... by all means give me suggestions and correction! lol I thank you for them. This is the first time I've written anything like this where so much is going on at once and I want it to make sense.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story