Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by lemon 05-25-2008 11:59,   ... I thought it was good, but I am confused as to how we got here from chapter one. I think you could actually use "chapter one" as an introduction or a teaser to draw the reader into the rest of the story, not as the first chapter. :)   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story