Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by CELL 05-22-2008 14:00,   ... You integrated all of these neat descriptions, so ya that does make this 'fuller.' You should have kept some of the old stuff though, it made it more morbid, but I mean just continue on to the next chapter. I've got the concept you're going for here, so now expand.    Good job. Oh and some of your words are glued onto others (likethis); I would fix that.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story