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05-20-2008 21:21,
Good story. A few little spelling errors from hitting the wrong keys but shit that happens to everybody. I like the apathetic attitude of the old man, just sitting in his tub patiently waiting for death and critiquing his killers lack of professionalism. Very nice work, thoroughly enjoyed it.