Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Something Indecent 05-13-2008 11:33,   ... Entertaining story. I think you need a better ending and to rewrite some of it to make a few of the sentences clearer and flow better. It was interesting though. It grabbed my attention.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story