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05-13-2008 06:29,
It seems a bit rushed, it’s a good story but it feels like you rushed it a bit. Not only that but it feels like you were trying to cover up something you didn’t want (Bat Man) with Pukey. But I spose that’s what every one does. Good writing nonetheless.