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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by CELL 05-12-2008 08:37,   ... Ah, sorry, I had read this already, but   couldn't comment. Thought I'd raise your  writing disposition to broiling degrees, well  at least to a full 100.  Ha, these new 'jock-type' characters are  something; good leverage.  I can hardly if ever find any 'holes' in your  storyline, you have everything under control;  you seem to fully understand the function of minor  characters, setting, plot, main characters, motif,   mood, etc.  Ah, what a stress-inducing hanger. Great job.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story