Better Day Tomorrow Walking the streets and not going home after work... Awakening of Minds (part one) So there I was, looking once more at the device...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by CELL 05-10-2008 21:41,   ... I thought this one would be different  from your other most recent poems, but  it isn't. it's a bit more subtle, but it is   expressing much of the same emotion  the others are... this is weird, but it's almost   as if you'd like this to be true, but it's not,   it's reaching towards breaking past some  hardship, but it is not succeeding...  it is really good though. as I've said   before, you are quite agile with pulling  stanzas together (and even in rhyming format).   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story