Awakening of Minds (part one) So there I was, looking once more at the device... Better Day Tomorrow Walking the streets and not going home after work...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 05-10-2008 10:59,   ... I disagree. I'm sure people have felt bad for betrayal.     Your poem is sweet in a sense. Like a little puppy who did something wrong. It feels terrible to have to replace your heart, and you portrayed that emotion perfectly. Very nice poem.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story