Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 05-10-2008 10:47,   ... It does seem forcing. At first I thought it was just a man pronouncing his love to a girl, but the last line really adds the effect. Well written for the emotion you desired.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story