Tired Avenue Dirkin/Anna Devine Hello all. Anna Devine (Sad Sara) and I have been... Drunk as a Skunk The first time I got drunk, well ... it wasn't a...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 05-10-2008 09:15,   ... I sort of like the separated effect. I mean, usually people don't comment on long stories.    And so the action commences. I really enjoyed this section with how realistic everything was described. The only thing I would ask for more would be imagery. I don't believe there is enough, because I have to keep imagining little sections in between.     Ending with another cliffhanger? Onto the next.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story