The People From The Sky I: Man On The Moon THE PEOPLE FROM THE SKY PART I:... The Peacock Case When the train doors opened, a blast of sticky air...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Egoist 05-10-2008 09:00,   ... The fact that they're hiding upstairs is such a creepy effect. Not like hospitals are uncomfortable already, but having to stay in the same building with moans and howls coming from upstairs in the dark, is pretty freaking creepy. This is such a tense moment in the story. Oh and how that cliffhanger prevails. The fact that you ended it so calmly but with a supernatural being keeps the reader tense. I'm really enjoying this, to the next.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story