Awakening of Minds (part one) So there I was, looking once more at the device... Don't put me in the same box Religious fanatic that's what they...

Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by Dirkin 05-09-2008 20:57,   ... i dont really know what to say... this seems like the first quarter of an introduction, you have barely established anything with no hint of a story or premise. I can relate to what I know of the character though, maybe you should keep writing if you know where you want to go, then it will be easier to judge   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story