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05-08-2008 15:24,
This was good..I think. Let me make myself clearer on that. I didn't really understand what you were saying through most of this. I understood about the button and killing ten of thousands but you dont make it clear about the one you say you may have killed. There are a few other things that didnt tie in together as well, but it was written in a cool kinda way which is the style i like. I assume the title does not reflect the story, but an explanation of your personal business. I think overall this was good without the nitpicking.