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Report a comment Thank you for taking the time to report the following comment to the administrator of this site. Please complete this short form and click the submit button to process your report. Name   E-mail   Reason for reporting comment       Comment in question Posted by cookingWine 05-07-2008 15:48,   ... Hm.  Not my style.  I'm not much for hippyish attitudes, or fireswords or wood nymphs or whatever that was.  If you're doing this just to describe a scene, then you should go nuts with descriptions. If there is a message you're trying to convey, the overly-descriptive background took away from it.    Keep on keeping on.  cS.   » Report this comment to administrator   »  Go back to the story